This is a mass preliminary e-mail to three mailing lists.
What I have done so far with the marketing PDF is get the content and
images laid out and desiring feedback for it at this stage. After I get
some technical critique and suggestions, I'll go ahead and work on
visual presentation.
Some notes that I have that I have seen is:
-a need to seperate some of the feature paragraphs with a line or some
sort of visual blockage so people know where to stop.
-locate where "word divisions" is so that the justification of the text
doesn't string out so much of the words in some areas.
-decorate and also fill the 9th page with technical information.
-find some image to use on the 1st page at the top. A header is needed.
latest PDF: http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/fed_overview/11-7.pdf
tarball with all files:
http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/fed_overview/F8-Press-Release.tar.gz
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~Michael
http://ridleytx.structed.net (for now)
http://michaelbox.net (eventually)
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