Re: [PATCH] dt-bindings: net: dsa: mediatek,mt7530: Minor grammar fixes

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On 24/06/2024 19.29, Conor Dooley wrote:
On Mon, Jun 24, 2024 at 10:00:25AM +0300, Arınç ÜNAL wrote:
On 24/06/2024 05.58, Chris Packham wrote:
Update the mt7530 binding with some minor updates that make the document
easier to read.

Signed-off-by: Chris Packham <chris.packham@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
---

Notes:
      I was referring to this dt binding and found a couple of places where
      the wording could be improved. I'm not exactly a techical writer but
      hopefully I've made things a bit better.

   .../devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml        | 6 +++---
   1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml
index 1c2444121e60..6c0abb020631 100644
--- a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml
+++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml
@@ -22,16 +22,16 @@ description: |
     The MT7988 SoC comes with a built-in switch similar to MT7531 as well as four
     Gigabit Ethernet PHYs. The switch registers are directly mapped into the SoC's
-  memory map rather than using MDIO. The switch got an internally connected 10G
+  memory map rather than using MDIO. The switch has an internally connected 10G
     CPU port and 4 user ports connected to the built-in Gigabit Ethernet PHYs.
-  MT7530 in MT7620AN, MT7620DA, MT7620DAN and MT7620NN SoCs has got 10/100 PHYs
+  MT7530 in MT7620AN, MT7620DA, MT7620DAN and MT7620NN SoCs have 10/100 PHYs

MT7530 is singular, the sentence is correct as it is.

Actually, the sentence is missing a definite article, so is not correct
as-is.

The definite article is omitted for the sake of brevity. I don't believe
omitting the definite article renders the sentence incorrect.



     and the switch registers are directly mapped into SoC's memory map rather than
     using MDIO. The DSA driver currently doesn't support MT7620 variants.
     There is only the standalone version of MT7531.
-  Port 5 on MT7530 has got various ways of configuration:
+  Port 5 on MT7530 supports various configurations:

This is a rewrite, not a grammar fix.

In both cases "has got" is clumsy wording,

We don't use "have/has" on the other side of the Atlantic often.

Arınç




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