Minor editing of Chapter 1, including: * grammar fixes * fix reference that has missing "_" Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> --- not sure why this didn't apply to the current chapter 1, it seems to apply cleanly here. diff --git a/source/introduction.rst b/source/introduction.rst index 8105c4f..1f0914c 100644 --- a/source/introduction.rst +++ b/source/introduction.rst @@ -103,10 +103,10 @@ IEEE 1275 specification that are omitted from the |spec| include: What is retained from IEEE 1275 are concepts from the devicetree architecture by which a boot program can describe and communicate system -hardware information to client program, thus eliminating the need for +hardware information to a client program, thus eliminating the need for the client program to have hard-coded descriptions of system hardware. -This specification partially supersedes the |epapr| [EPAPR] specification. +This specification partially supersedes the |epapr| [EPAPR]_ specification. |epapr| documents how devicetree is used by the Power ISA, and covers both general concepts, as well as Power ISA specific bindings. The text of this document was derived from |epapr|, but either removes architecture specific bindings, or moves them into an appendix. @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ Definition of Terms AMP Asymmetric Multiprocessing. Computer available CPUs are partitioned into groups, each running a distinct operating system image. The CPUs - may or not may not identical. + may or may not be identical. boot CPU The first CPU which a boot program directs to a client programʼs -- ======================================================================== Robert P. J. Day Ottawa, Ontario, CANADA http://crashcourse.ca/dokuwiki Twitter: http://twitter.com/rpjday LinkedIn: http://ca.linkedin.com/in/rpjday ========================================================================