[PATCH] Minor editing fixes for Chapter 1.

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Minor editing of Chapter 1, including:

  * grammar fixes
  * fix reference that has missing "_"

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

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diff --git a/source/introduction.rst b/source/introduction.rst
index 8105c4f..1f0914c 100644
--- a/source/introduction.rst
+++ b/source/introduction.rst
@@ -103,10 +103,10 @@ IEEE 1275 specification that are omitted from the |spec| include:

 What is retained from IEEE 1275 are concepts from the devicetree
 architecture by which a boot program can describe and communicate system
-hardware information to client program, thus eliminating the need for
+hardware information to a client program, thus eliminating the need for
 the client program to have hard-coded descriptions of system hardware.

-This specification partially supersedes the |epapr| [EPAPR] specification.
+This specification partially supersedes the |epapr| [EPAPR]_ specification.
 |epapr| documents how devicetree is used by the Power ISA, and covers both
 general concepts, as well as Power ISA specific bindings.
 The text of this document was derived from |epapr|, but either removes architecture specific bindings, or moves them into an appendix.
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ Definition of Terms
    AMP
        Asymmetric Multiprocessing. Computer available CPUs are partitioned into
        groups, each running a distinct operating system image. The CPUs
-       may or not may not identical.
+       may or may not be identical.

    boot CPU
        The first CPU which a boot program directs to a client programʼs

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