Re: [libvirt-virshcmdref 04/10] update documentation for command dump

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On 09/14/2011 01:28 AM, Hu Tao wrote:

+<parameter requirement="optional">
+<keyword requirement="optional">--crach</keyword>

s/crach/crash/

+<examples type="fullcontext">
+<example>
+<text>
+        In this example we will dump the core of a domain and analysis it

s/analysis/analyze/

+<terminal>crash /patch/to/vmlinux /mnt/data/dumps/example-domain.dump</terminal>
+<text>

Trailing whitespace.

+        the vmlinux is the file containing debug information, usually it locates at the root

s/locates/is located/

ACK to 1-3 as-is, and to 4 with these nits fixed, so I've pushed. I'll see if I can get review time for 5-10 soon, but I've run out of time today.

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