On 11/17/2010 07:15 AM, Osier Yang wrote: > * tools/virsh.pod (change things like "edit domain.xml" into > "vi domain.xml", so that it's more clear for user) > --- > tools/virsh.pod | 16 ++++++++-------- > 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod > index 8032256..ca8ba74 100644 > --- a/tools/virsh.pod > +++ b/tools/virsh.pod > @@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ L<http://libvirt.org/formatdomain.html#elementsCPU> > > The following commands manipulate domains directly, as stated > previously most commands take domain-id as the first parameter. The > -I<domain-id> can be specified as an short integer, a name or a full UUID. > +I<domain-id> can be specified as a short integer, a name or a full UUID. > > =over 4 > > @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ If I<--console> is requested, attach to the console after creation. > B<Example> > > virsh dumpxml <domain-id> > domain.xml > - edit domain.xml > + vi domain.xml (or make changes with your other text editor) Thanks for reviving this; and your wording works for me (I'm sure I could bike shed several other wording choices, but this one's reasonable enough to avoid any further delays). ACK, and applied. -- Eric Blake eblake@xxxxxxxxxx +1-801-349-2682 Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org
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