Wording tweak suggested by David Jorm, author of the libvirt App Dev Guide.
---
docs/devguide.html.in | 14 +++++++-------
docs/downloads.html.in | 14 +++++++-------
2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/devguide.html.in b/docs/devguide.html.in
index 409952e..6c51c36 100644
--- a/docs/devguide.html.in
+++ b/docs/devguide.html.in
@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@
<h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1>
<p>
- This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful
- reference document. It is a work in progress, contributed to by the
- members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional
- author.
+ The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an
+ API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a
+ professional author from contributions written by members of the
+ libvirt team.
</p>
<p>
- Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to
- get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess,
- contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :)
+ Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get
+ your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid
+ contribution to the content here will do it. :)
</p>
<h2>Browsable online</h2>
diff --git a/docs/downloads.html.in b/docs/downloads.html.in
index 66b99e1..2ce1048 100644
--- a/docs/downloads.html.in
+++ b/docs/downloads.html.in
@@ -49,16 +49,16 @@
<h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1>
<p>
- This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful
- reference document. It is a work in progress, contributed to by the
- members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional
- author.
+ The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an
+ API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a
+ professional author from contributions written by members of the
+ libvirt team.
</p>
<p>
- Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to
- get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess,
- contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :)
+ Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get
+ your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid
+ contribution to the content here will do it. :)
</p>
<h2>Downloadable PDF</h2>
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1.7.2.2
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