-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Shabazian, Chip wrote: > All, > > As promised, I have finally completed the presentation for LinuxWorld > and welcome feedback and corrections: > > http://www.shabazian.com/lw2007.pdf > > Thanks, and I hope it's useful to someone. > > Chip > I am not sure how this will be presented. However, when I used xpdf to review the document, the code examples were "washed" out. I could see the code samples better, once I viewed the file at 200%. My monitor settings are 1280 by 1024. That setting may highlight a problem your presentation hall viewers will have. I would suggest using a bold fix text font for those sections of the document. Perhaps a font size adjustment would also help, if you can still fit you code segments on the same page. Your title says "Tips and Tricks". I don't get to hear you present so much of the "glue presentation" is missing for me as I review the document. When I blitzed through the document the first time, I was wondering what the difference between the main part and the appendices? That comes from a programmer looking at another alphabetic api looking document. With that being said, how can you set off your tip and trick sections so that I can focus on these? This may be an audience question for you. For people that have clicked themselves through several server installations, finding out about anaconda is a major tip. If you're going for the newbie crowd, then you may have hit the mark. If you're going for the advanced crowd, then covering more of the struggles that you see on the kickstart list would be helpful. At what level do your tips and tricks hit home? Since you are talking about imaging hard drives, is stateless linux worth putting in too http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/StatelessLinux or are these technologies that you have used? It is nice that B of A supports your efforts. Tell 'em thanks. HTH, Greg -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.2.2 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Fedora - http://enigmail.mozdev.org iD8DBQFGkKo1xyxe5L6mr7IRAjrVAKCHIFbD3iQAxd6Ijv+H8ndC4G27aQCfX0io RSIb2WZ2Fgk+bJ+YXW1nP2E= =k5cW -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
