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Hi,

https://fedoraproject.org/en/get-fedora

This is the latest version of the Fedora Linux operating system's
Desktop Edition. It's everything you need to try out Fedora -- you don't
have to erase anything on your current system to try it out, and it
won't put your files at risk. Take Fedora for a test drive, and
if you like it,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

you can install Fedora directly to your hard drive straight from the
Live Media desktop

if you like
^^^^^^^^^^^

sounds weird to me. Perhaps removing the last "if you like"? Unlikely
people will download another image just to install it.

Hope it helps :)

-- 
Aristeu

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