Re: Correction suggestion to features page

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2010/11/9 Turner, Rick <RTurner@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

Hi, I think the sentence on this page: http://fedoraproject.org/en/features/

 

“You can use the Fedora operating system to replace or to run alongside of other operating systems”

 

Should read:

 

“You can use the Fedora operating system to replace or run alongside other operating systems”


Hi Rick,

English is not my native language so I had to do a little research, but it seems that both "alongside" and "alongside of" are acceptable uses. So I think it's fine if we leave it like this.

Maybe someone with more knowledge on this subject can tell us which version is better, style-wise?

No offence intended. I’m just trying to help.


None taken, feedback like this is good, even if it's minor spelling errors.

Jef
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