Product: Fedora Documentation https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=962869 --- Comment #1 from Leslie Satenstein <lsatenstein@xxxxxxxxx> --- Created attachment 747916 --> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/attachment.cgi?id=747916&action=edit Spelling corrections, some grammatical improvements, and double word eliminations Please note. I have only covered the first three sections of the Fedora 19 release notes. The before imaqe is the web-site page, any correction to that page is noted in the text document with a matching paragraph number. Please note, I will replaced topics that are Americanized English with non slang. Here is an example: I will talk to you on Bind10. (revised to ) I will talk to you about Bind10, or concerning Bind10. I can be on topic or off topic, but normally I stand on the floor, or sit on a chair. I replace on with about, etc. I also "listen to a socket" as opposed to "listen on a socket". Spelling fixed, wordiness fixed, sentences split into topics. Please advise if you want me to continue. With the changes, translation to other languages will be more accurate with the tw tool. -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug. -- relnotes-content mailing list relnotes-content@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/relnotes-content
