[Fedora Project Wiki] Update of "Docs/Beats/Xorg" by MurrayMcAllister

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http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Xorg?action=diff&rev2=49&rev1=48

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try to remove passive voice, lower-case lists...

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  === X Configuration Changes ===
  
- The X.org [[GetVal(DocsDict,XorgVer)]] X server has been modified to automatically detect and configure most hardware, eliminating the need for users or administrators to modify the `/etc/X11/xorg.conf` configuration file. The only hardware configured by default in the `xorg.conf` file written by anaconda is:
+ The X.org [[GetVal(DocsDict,XorgVer)]] X server has been modified to automatically detect and configure most hardware, eliminating the to modify the `/etc/X11/xorg.conf` configuration file. The only hardware configured by default in the `xorg.conf` file written by Anaconda is:
  
-  * The graphics driver
+  * the graphics driver.
-  * The keyboard map
+  * the keyboard map.
  
- All other hardware, such as monitors (both LCD and CRT), USB mice, and touchpads should be detected and configured automatically.
+ All other hardware, such as monitors (both LCD and CRT), USB mice, and touchpads, should be detected and configured automatically.
  
- The X server queries the attached monitor for supported resolution ranges, and attempts to pick the highest resolution available with the correct aspect ratio for the display. Users can set their preferred resolution in ''System > Preferences > Screen Resolution'', and the default resolution for the system can be changed with ''System > Administration > Display''.
+ The X server queries the attached monitor for supported resolution ranges, and attempts to pick the highest resolution available with the correct aspect ratio for the display. Set the preferred resolution in ''System > Preferences > Screen Resolution'', and the default resolution for the system in ''System > Administration > Display''.
  
- If the `/etc/X11/xorg.conf` configuration file is not present, X also automatically detects the appropriate driver, and assumes a 105-key US keyboard layout.
+ If the `/etc/X11/xorg.conf` configuration file is not present, X automatically detects the appropriate driver, and assumes a 105-key US keyboard layout.
  
  === Intel Driver notes ===
  
- Fedora [[GetVal(DocsDict,BeatsVer)]] contains two drivers for Intel integrated graphics controllers:
+ Fedora [[GetVal(DocsDict,BeatsVer)]] contains two drivers for Intel Integrated Graphics Controllers:
  
-  * The default `i810` driver, which contains support for Intel graphics chipsets up to and including i945 and i965 
+  * the default `i810` driver, which contains support for Intel graphic chipsets up to and including i945 and i965. 
-  * The experimental `intel` driver, which contains support for Intel graphics chipsets up to and including i945
+  * the experimental `intel` driver, which contains support for Intel graphic chipsets up to and including i945.
  
- The `i810` driver is limited to resolutions available in the BIOS. If you need support for non-standard resolutions, such as those used in some widescreen displays, you may want to switch to the `intel` driver. You may switch drivers by using `system-config-display`, available in the menus under ''System > Administration > Display''.
+ The `i810` driver is limited to resolutions available in the BIOS. For support for non-standard resolutions, such as those used in certain widescreen displays, use the `intel` driver. Switch drivers by running the {{{system-config-display}}} command, which is also available in the menu under ''System > Administration > Display''.
  
- We welcome feedback on the experimental `intel` driver. Please report success in [http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/ Bugzilla], attaching the full output of `lspci -vn` for your machine. Given success reports, various chipsets may be switched to use the `intel` driver by default.
+ We welcome feedback on the experimental `intel` driver. Please report success in [http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/ Bugzilla], attaching the full output of the {{{lspci -vn}}} command for your machine. Given success reports, various chipsets may be switched to use the `intel` driver by default.
  
  === Third Party Video Drivers ===
  
- If you intend to use third party video drivers, refer to the [http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Xorg/3rdPartyVideoDrivers Xorg third party drivers] page for detailed guidelines. 
+ Refer to the [http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Xorg/3rdPartyVideoDrivers Xorg third-party drivers] page for detailed guidelines on using third-party video drivers.
  

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