On Sun, 15 Feb 2009 10:53:13 -0800, "Adam Williamson" <awilliam@xxxxxxxxxx> said: > Hi, guys. I've just completed the QA section for FWN. As it's my first > shot, can people please check it over and make sure I didn't screw > up? :) Thanks! It flows very nicely and is very readable. I think Dale's comments are useful and would add that it's probably best to specify dates and times as per the style guide[1]. Apart from the large number of local variations in how dates are written out the content is archived so it's easier for people reading it to see 2009-02-19 than "this Thursday, February 19th". [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/StyleGuide/DatesAndTimes Thanks again for taking on this beat Adam! Best, -- Oisin Feeley http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/OisinFeeley _______________________________________________ Fedora-news-list mailing list Fedora-news-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-news-list