On Mon, Jun 22, 2020 at 7:39 AM <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Hello Richard, > > I think I got them all, also added "is" and "has" to two sentences that > were missing their conjunction. > Thanks, one more... Near the top of the "FirewallD Configuration the second paragraph starts: For the proactive approach... That should be "reactive", the proactive is near the bottom of that section. Thanks! Richard _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx