FWIW, it looks good to me. Since the grammar is a little rough in the first quotation, should "[sic]" be appended to the end? On Mon, 2020-02-17 at 17:00 -0500, Ben Cotton wrote: > The draft of my article idea from November is finally ready: > https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/123?kanban-status=191 > > Adam had planned on publishing this Wednesday, so it will need a not-me to > give it an editorial once-over. There's supposedly a featured image > prepared for it, but I couldn't find it in WordPress quickly. > > I did send this to my contact at NTK a few moments ago so that he could > tell me if there are any blatant lies in it. Hopefully he doesn't come back > with any major edits (or worse: he has major edits but doesn't get them to > me until after we publish). > > > Thanks, > BC > > -- > Ben Cotton > He / Him / His > Senior Program Manager, Fedora & CentOS Stream > Red Hat > TZ=America/Indiana/Indianapolis > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx