Hey Ben, I just clicked the preview link out of curiosity to see what your "significant rewriting" looked like. I think I may have spotted a small grammatical mistake. The third paragraph begins: "Fedora has been always included only ..." Is that proper English grammar? Just FYI. On Wed, 2020-02-12 at 16:43 -0500, Ben Cotton wrote: > Honza, > > I've taken an editorial pass at your MongoDB article[1]. I did some > significant rewriting in a couple of places in order to be careful > with how we present license issues, Fedora's stance on them, etc. > Please let me know if you object to anything. > > asamalik is going to create a featured image for it and we plan to > publish it on Monday. We created a card[2] for it on the editorial > board this morning. Please note our new editorial workflow[3] > > [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30452&preview=true > [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/136?kanban-status=196 > [3] https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/workflow/ > > -- > Ben Cotton > He / Him / His > Senior Program Manager, Fedora & CentOS Stream > Red Hat > TZ=America/Indiana/Indianapolis > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
