Hello folks! I have this article finished and ready to get some feedback. Personally I feel that the section about first hand impressions needs editing. Looks too long and heavy to me. I also think it would be nice to have some screenshots but I don't know what others think about it. It's definitely needing a banner image. I can provide or make one, if you like. Please, check the facts in the history line, I tried to keep it simple and short but since this falls before my time using Fedora I might have made a mistake or two. This is the link: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview Kind regards, Lailah _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
