On Mon, Sep 3, 2018 at 11:24 AM Alessio Ciregia <alciregi@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > On Mon, Sep 3, 2018 at 4:04 PM Peter Robinson <pbrobinson@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > > The first version I saw was very long and I suggested we could break > > it into 2 or 3 articles. > > So the content could be ok? > We could break it in two parts: the first descriptive part (what is > Fedora IoT, what is podman etc.) and in the second part how to create > a container and how to work with the GPIO. > It makes sense? I don't think the article needs to be broken up, but some other changes could be made to make it shorter. The large section about ostree is mostly unnecessary, since the article isn't about the benefits of ostree. If we want to have a separate article explaining Fedora IoT, that would be welcome. But it's not necessary to try to do both in this one article. -- Paul _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx