Hi Paul, I have edited the article once again considering all the inputs suggested. Please let me know if i need to fine tune it once again. Thanks a lot !!! Ashutosh On Wed, 2018-04-18 at 09:11 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote: > Hi Ashutosh & co., > > We'd like to schedule the buildah article to publish but there are a > few rough edges that need help: > > * The first section doesn't give enough introduction to buildah. The > only thing a reader knows is they're not using a daemon. Why > should > they care about that? Feel free to get help from Tom or William to > add some introduction. It doesn't need to be more than a short > paragraph or two. But readers should understand why the Magazine > is > suggesting they use this utility. > > * The second section with the httpd use case works pretty well, but > it's a good idea to start the section by introducing the example. > > * Don't use "we," "us," "I," or "me" in articles. The Magazine > doesn't speak using the first person. You often don't even need to > use "you," although that's fine if it makes text clearer. > > Paul > > On Tue, Apr 17, 2018 at 02:02:47PM +0530, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote: > > Hello Tom, > > Its up and runnig, I guess you need fedoramagazine login details > > for > > this > > > > Regards > > Ashutosh > > On Mon, 2018-04-16 at 10:39 -0400, Tom Sweeney wrote: > > > Hi Ashutosh, > > > > > > I tried pulling up the page via the link below, but it's > > > returning a > > > 404 > > > error. Has it moved? > > > > > > t > > > > > > On 04/15/2018 02:09 PM, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote: > > > > Hi Paul, > > > > > > > > Thanks for approving !! Its was great help by refering Tom's > > > > and > > > > William blogs. Cheers :) > > > > > > > > I have drafted the article as below, please have a look and do > > > > suggest > > > > if any changes or editing required. > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=20945&preview=true&preview_id=209 > > > > 45 > > > > > > > > I could see that builah, podman, skopeo are very vast tools, i > > > > have > > > > wrrtten the draft considering "intermediate" level of audience > > > > on > > > > buildah. If given a chance i would love to write a next level > > > > article > > > > on buildah which may cover a topic like "creating a image from > > > > scratch" _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
