Hi! You're missing a dot after "in 2015" and a comma after "and others". You also wrote "finall", was it maybe "finally"? This sentence "The physical pursuits couple with his rabbit food meal plan help keep him in shape.". I understand it but it could be better I think. Those are the ones I caught at the moment. Maybe there are others I overlooked. Regards, Silvia FAS: Lailah 2018-01-06 1:35 GMT+01:00 charles profitt <fedora@xxxxxxxxxxxx>: > Hello all: > > The next How Do You Fedora article is ready for review. > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=19863&preview=1&_ppp=55c04036f6 > > Sorry for the delay on this one. I have one more person I am > contacting, but due to robotics it might take a while to put together > and get ready. > > Charles > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
