On Sun, Oct 29, 2017 at 11:48:28PM +0530, Jogender Kvs wrote: > Hey all, > > On Fri, Oct 20, 2017 at 10:05 PM, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > Hi Jogender, > > > > I quite like this article. Here are some tips for you to try in > > tuning up the draft a bit: > > > > * Try to eliminate "we" or "I" in articles. Instead, just give simple > > command-style instructions where needed, like "Type the following > > command." > > > > * Describe a bit more beyond the simple file and theme functions. Can > > you show the debugger and the git integration a little more fully? > > > > Thanks and we look forward to reading your revisions! > > > @Paul, I have worked on the suggested changes. > Please review the same. Thanks again for your time. It looks improved to me. We'll do some further tuning and we plan to publish within the next week or two, depending on F27 release date, since there are some required articles to push out in that time. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
