It looks pretty good for me. Agreed with moving the "What's new?" to the beginning. Also, is the FIXME note to [1] or [2]? IMHO, it's worthy to mention the new Spin (LXQt) that have been already mention in a "day-before release post" fomr ZDNet [3] Br, X3MBoy [1] - https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_26_talking_points [2] - https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Releases/26/ChangeSet [3] - http://www.zdnet.com/article/fedora-26-is-coming-heres-what-you-need-to-know/ 2017-07-10 12:58 GMT-04:00 Matthew Miller <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>: > Comments wanted on > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=18026&preview=true&preview_id= > 18026&preview_nonce=2132f1108b&post_format=standard&_thumbnail_id=18027 > > As I reread, one thing I'm thinking about is moving the "what's new" > paragraph up above the all-the-other-options paragraph. Anything else? > > Also, Ryan, can you change the ownership of that article from you to > me, please? Thanks! > > -- > Matthew Miller > <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Fedora Project Leader > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > -- Eduard Lucena Móvil: +56975687314 GNU/Linux User #589060 Ubuntu User #8749 Fedora Ambassador Latam _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
