On 21.09.2016 06:38, Sylvia wrote: > Hi! > > These are the links to the split articles: > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14609&preview=1&_ppp=aba0906896 [1] > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14604&preview=1&_ppp=8f312371fd [2] > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14606&preview=1&_ppp=ffb91c25fd [3] > > Cheers and thank you very much! > Sylvia > > On Tue, 2016-09-20 at 18:20 +0000, Personal (open) wrote: > On 19.09.2016 06:44, Sylvia wrote: Hello all! I created three articles out of the original one and I'm starting to > polish them a bit. Please, can anyone take a look and say if it's okay > or needs something, or if I do it all wrong and we have to start over? > Thanks and cheers, Sylvia _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject. org >> As I have had shaky internet access could you post a preview link to the > series articles? I'd gladly review them. _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Slyvia, Article one is solid and ready imo Article 2 has a typo in 5. and 6 should emphasize direct login /login without password is aka auto login Article 3 needs not rehash the bit about password longevity (3-6 months), also its dnssecand opendnssec not Open/dnssec otherwise solid and gtg . -- Corey W Sheldon ph: +1 (310).909.7672 0x8B4E89435A88E539 0x59276298D2264944 Freelance IT Consultant, Multi-Discipline Tutor Fedora AmbaNA (linuxmodder) Ameridea LLC Founder, President Find me elsewhere: https://gist.github.com/linux-modder/ac5dc6fa211315c633c9 "One must never underestimate the power of boredom...from which creativity and laziness are borne, which can spark great works of chaos and genius." --Anonymous "Any man willing to retreat freedom for security is deserving of neither." (Pp) -- Benjamin Franklin. This document, including attachments, is intended for the person or company named and contains confidential and/or legally privileged information. Unauthorized disclosure, copying or use of this information may be unlawful and is prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please destroy this message and notify the sender. Links: ------ [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14609&preview=1&_ppp=aba0906896 [2] https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14604&preview=1&_ppp=8f312371fd [3] https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14606&preview=1&_ppp=ffb91c25fd _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
