On Tue, Dec 02, 2014 at 10:26:49AM -0500, Jaroslav Reznik wrote: > Hi all! > As we're getting to pretty solid RC, it's again time for release > announcement. Readiness meeting is on Thursday, would be nice to > have a draft ready for review and final version next Monday, so > text formatted and magazine versions can be prepared in advance. > > Workstation seems to be pretty covered, do we have any additions > to Server and Cloud? The other thing is to get rid of all Beta > strings. > > http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F21_Final_release_announcement > > Thanks Joe for starting it and Paul for Workstation bit so > far! We had the best Alpha/Beta announcements so far, let's > continue with this high bar :). As you guys are crafting improved notes, for better consistency, it would be great to write in present tense about the release. INCONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar will include special flavor crystals that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman." CONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar includes special flavor crystals that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman." HTH! -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ cloud mailing list cloud@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/cloud Fedora Code of Conduct: http://fedoraproject.org/code-of-conduct
