Re: Content for getfedora.org, meeting recap

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On 11/10/2014 02:50 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> Minutes:         http://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-mktg/2014-11-10/website-content.2014-11-10-19.03.html
> Minutes (text):  http://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-mktg/2014-11-10/website-content.2014-11-10-19.03.txt
> Log:             http://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-mktg/2014-11-10/website-content.2014-11-10-19.03.log.html

One thing I have noticed - we don't have a "place" for Fedora Docker
images. Since they were taken on by the base WG, they have sort of been
orphaned under products. Do they belong under Server? Cloud? Spins?

> Notable -- Once a draft of strings are finished for the getfedora.org
> site, we'll pass to Working Groups through their liaisons for
> feedback.  We're aiming to have those in the next 24 hours or so.

Hmmm. So I produced a patch against the getfedora branch. (Attached)
Here's the strings for the cloud pages:

main page:

Fedora Cloud:

Fedora Cloud provides a minimal Fedora cloud image for use in public and
private cloud environments. It includes just the bare essentials so you
get enough to run your cloud application -- and nothing more.

Get Cloud page:

Top:

Fedora Cloud has the tools
for public and private clouds,
traditional workloads, or Docker containers.

Middle:

The Fedora Cloud Working Group offers two variants for different use
cases. The Base image is suitable for anyone who wants to run Fedora in
the AWS public cloud, or on a private cloud like OpenStack.
The Fedora Atomic Host is generated using rpm-ostree to allow true
"atomic" updates, and is optimized to run Docker containers.
Both are available in formats suitable for public or private clouds.

[[We need a quote or something for the middle - who could we get
something from? Think testimonial.]]

Bottom:

Fedora Cloud images provide leading edge software for development and
deployment in public cloud environments.

-- 
Joe Brockmeier | Principal Cloud & Storage Analyst
jzb@xxxxxxxxxx | http://community.redhat.com/
Twitter: @jzb  | http://dissociatedpress.net/
diff --git a/getfedora.org/data/content/cloud/index.html b/getfedora.org/data/content/cloud/index.html
index 401f54b..7423fea 100644
--- a/getfedora.org/data/content/cloud/index.html
+++ b/getfedora.org/data/content/cloud/index.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
     <div class="container cloud">
       <div class="row">
         <div class="col-md-6 col-md-offset-1 text-left">
-          <h1>Clouders, this is <br />the Linux cloudy cloud cloud you've <br />been waiting for.</h1>
+          <h1>Fedora Cloud has the tools <br /> for public and private clouds, <br /> traditional workloads, or Docker containers.</h1>
         </div>
       </div>
       <div class="row">
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
     <div class="container text-center ">
       <div class="row">
         <div class="col-md-6 col-md-offset-3">
-            <h3>More detailed explanation of what Fedora Workstation is and how it is simply awesome and totally desirable to use.</h3>
+            <p>The Fedora Cloud Working Group offers two variants for different use cases. The Base image is suitable for anyone who wants to run Fedora in the AWS public cloud, or on a private cloud like OpenStack.<br /> The Fedora Atomic Host is generated using <strong><a href="http://www.projectatomic.io/docs/os-updates/";>rpm-ostree</a></strong> to allow true "atomic" updates, and is optimized to run Docker containers.<br /> Both are available in formats suitable for public or private clouds.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
     <div class="container text-center ">
       <div class="row">
         <div class="col-md-6 col-md-offset-3">
-            <h3>Testimonial from actual developers who use Fedora to do the kinds of things the developers we'd like to attract actually do.</h3>
+            <h3><em>"Fedora Atomic Host is the most up-to-date way to deploy Docker containers."</em><br /> &ndash; Joe Brockmeier, Cloud Dude</h3>
         </div>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     <div class="container text-center ">
       <div class="row">
         <div class="col-md-6 col-md-offset-3">
-            <h3>Highlight of a feature you get with Fedora that makes it compelling to use (e.g. software collections) for devs.</h3>
+            <h3>Fedora Cloud images provide leading edge software for development and deployment in public cloud environments.</h3>
         </div>
       </div>
     </div>
diff --git a/getfedora.org/data/content/index.html b/getfedora.org/data/content/index.html
index d15f0b6..a043b35 100644
--- a/getfedora.org/data/content/index.html
+++ b/getfedora.org/data/content/index.html
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
         <div class="col-sm-4 col-xs-12 highlight">
           <div class="h-caption"><img src="${path}/static/images/color-cloud.png" class="img-responsive center-block" /></div>
           <div class="h-body text-justify">
-            <p>Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisicing elit. Voluptatem, vitae, perferendis, perspiciatis nobis voluptate quod illum soluta minima ipsam ratione quia numquam eveniet eum reprehenderit dolorem dicta nesciunt corporis?</p>
+            <p>Fedora Cloud provides a minimal Fedora cloud image for use in public and private cloud environments. It includes just the bare essentials so you get enough to run your cloud application -- and nothing more.</p>
             <div class="visible-xs text-center"><a href="cloud" class="btn btn-action btn-primary active" role="button">GET IT NOW!</a></div>
           </div>
         </div>

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