Hi Ed, On Tue, Aug 17, 2010 at 06:01:23PM -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote: > >> The Fedora Project strives towards a world in which computers fueled > >> primarily by free & open source software, both client and server, and > >> content improve the lives of users all over the world. On Wed, 2010-08-18 at 08:58 +0800, Ed Greshko wrote: > I hesitate to include my input on this....but I would have some issues > as well. > > I have never been a fan of what I consider to be unnecessary qualifiers > when it comes to Vision Statements. In the area of Our Mission I would > strike the words "always" and "consistently". Who wouldn't "always > strive" or "consistently seek to improve"? > > Also, I would not say "on the part of many" since it lends itself to > interpretation. Since "many" doesn't imply "all" it may lead to some > folks wondering things like "Who are the many?", "Am I one of the > many?", "How are the many selected?". I was completely lost until I finally realized you were commenting on our mission statement, not the vision statement. The mission statement was created and agreed upon a long time ago. That isn't the subject here; I only included it in my original post for easy reference. We're discussing the vision statement (see quote above), which we have never as a project had before. ~m _______________________________________________ advisory-board mailing list advisory-board@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/advisory-board
