On Mon, Aug 24, 2009 at 03:56:00PM -0400, Bill Nottingham wrote: > mairin@xxxxxxxxxxxxx (mairin@xxxxxxxxxxxxx) said: > > Please let me know if this mockup is an improvement over the other one and > > helps. > > I'm missing an earlier one to compare against... but it's certainly miles > better than what's there now. > > Minor comments: > > - s/Need to upgrade/Already using/ ? > - 'More download options' and 'Other options' seems redundant. > - The light gray text gives an impression of the entire site running at 75% > opacity to me. Maybe I'm nuts. The evolution was: http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/temp/woot/page2.png http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/temp/woot/getfpo-2.png http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/temp/woot/getfpo-16.png -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug _______________________________________________ fedora-advisory-board mailing list fedora-advisory-board@xxxxxxxxxx http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-advisory-board
