Jeremy Katz wrote:
> We used "default" a lot in the text. Change based on notting's suggestion
> and make the intro text a little clearer to match
> ---
> iw/autopart_type.py | 8 ++++----
> textw/partition_text.py | 12 ++++--------
> ui/autopart.glade | 2 +-
> 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/iw/autopart_type.py b/iw/autopart_type.py
> index 33efa5f..f166eab 100644
> --- a/iw/autopart_type.py
> +++ b/iw/autopart_type.py
> @@ -415,10 +415,10 @@ class PartitionTypeWindow(InstallWindow):
>
> store = gtk.TreeStore(gobject.TYPE_STRING, gobject.TYPE_INT)
> self.combo.set_model(store)
> - opts = ((_("Remove all partitions on selected drives and create default layout"), CLEARPART_TYPE_ALL),
> - (_("Remove Linux partitions on selected drives and create default layout"), CLEARPART_TYPE_LINUX),
> - (_("Resize existing partition and create default layout in free space"), -2),
> - (_("Use free space on selected drives and create default layout"), CLEARPART_TYPE_NONE),
> + opts = ((_("Use entire drive"), CLEARPART_TYPE_ALL),
> + (_("Replace existing Linux system"), CLEARPART_TYPE_LINUX),
> + (_("Shrink current system"), -2),
> + (_("Use free space"), CLEARPART_TYPE_NONE),
> (_("Create custom layout"), -1))
> for (txt, val) in opts:
> iter = store.append(None)
> diff --git a/textw/partition_text.py b/textw/partition_text.py
> index 83638d0..1944ee1 100644
> --- a/textw/partition_text.py
> +++ b/textw/partition_text.py
> @@ -1508,16 +1508,12 @@ class PartitionTypeWindow:
> while 1:
> g = GridFormHelp(screen, _("Partitioning Type"), "autopart", 1, 6)
>
> - txt = TextboxReflowed(65, _("Installation requires partitioning "
> - "of your hard drive. The default "
> - "layout is reasonable for most "
> - "users. You can either choose "
> - "to use this or create your own."))
> + txt = TextboxReflowed(65, _("Installation requires partitioning of your hard drive. The default layout is suitable for most users. Select what space to use and which drives to use as the install target. You can also choose to create your own custom layout."))
> g.add(txt, 0, 0, (0, 0, 0, 0))
>
> - opts = ((_("Remove all partitions on selected drives and create default layout"), CLEARPART_TYPE_ALL),
> - (_("Remove Linux partitions on selected drives and create default layout"), CLEARPART_TYPE_LINUX),
> - (_("Use free space on selected drives and create default layout"), CLEARPART_TYPE_NONE),
> + opts = ((_("Use entire drive"), CLEARPART_TYPE_ALL),
> + (_("Replace existing Linux system"), CLEARPART_TYPE_LINUX),
> + (_("Use free space"), CLEARPART_TYPE_NONE),
> (_("Create custom layout"), -1))
> typebox = Listbox(height = len(opts), scroll = 0)
> for (txt, val) in opts:
> diff --git a/ui/autopart.glade b/ui/autopart.glade
> index 9378cb6..199c359 100644
> --- a/ui/autopart.glade
> +++ b/ui/autopart.glade
> @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
> <child>
> <widget class="GtkLabel" id="mainlabel">
> <property name="visible">True</property>
> - <property name="label" translatable="yes">Installation requires partitioning of your hard drive. By default, a partitioning layout is chosen which is reasonable for most users. You can either choose to use this or create your own.</property>
> + <property name="label" translatable="yes">Installation requires partitioning of your hard drive. The default layout is suitable for most users. Select what space to use and which drives to use as the install target. You can also choose to create your own custom layout.</property>
> <property name="use_underline">False</property>
> <property name="use_markup">False</property>
> <property name="justify">GTK_JUSTIFY_LEFT</property>
Looks fine to me.
--
David Cantrell <dcantrell@xxxxxxxxxx>
Red Hat / Honolulu, HI
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